Patterns In Writing: Conflict

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Discussing types of conflict is a great first step towards building a strong narrative.

Although the term conjures up images of ninja battles for many of our students, conflict can take on many more sophisticated forms than physical fights.

These images from The Incredibles visually represent a range of conflicts:

Here Mr. Incredible is involved in physical conflict with his boss.

Bob physical

This image shows an emotional conflict between the two characters.

Bob argue

And here is Mr. Incredible in an environment that is causing conflict.

Bob car

All three images © Disney/Pixar, naturally

After discussing various ways we might feel conflict, you can formalize four types of conflict found in narrative writing. Keeping this number small reinforces an easy structure for students to follow as they build a story.

  • Character vs Character
  • Character vs Nature
  • Character vs Society
  • Character vs Self

Character vs Character

With character vs character conflict, two characters’ disagreements result in emotional and even physical conflict. It’s extremely common in stories from Seuss to Shakespeare.

Examples:

  • Luke Skywalker and Darth Vader
  • Dorothy and the Wicked Witch of the West
  • Sherlock Holmes and Professor Moriarty
  • Katniss Everdeen and President Snow
  • Harry Potter and Voldemort

A complex story has many layers of character vs character conflict. Harry Potter’s ultimate antagonist is Voldemort, but he has conflict with Professor Snape, his aunt and uncle, and even Ron and Hermione. Reinforce with students that conflict between characters does not have to mean a big physical fight.

Character vs Nature

Perhaps a character has no conflict with others, but is instead struggling against nature. This could involve a natural disaster, a fire in the home, or a day at the beach gone bad!

Examples:

  • In Hatchet, Brian struggles to survive in the Canadian wilderness
  • In Titanic, the characters struggle against the Atlantic ocean
  • In The Wizard of Oz, Dorothy has conflict with the tornado, the apple trees, and the poppies.
  • In The Hunger Games, Katniss must battle her hunger as well as fire and water during the games
  • In The Life of Pi, Pi must survive on a boat adrift on the ocean with a tiger on board!

Character vs Society

Characters might have a struggle against not just one person, but against the rules of their society. It’s easy to think of Martin Luther King fighting for civil rights, but struggles against society are also rich sources for conflict in stories.

Examples:

  • In The Incredibles, super heroes are not allowed to be super because society fears their power.
  • In The Hunger Games, Katniss fights against her oppressive society for freedom.
  • In Charlotte’s Web, Wilbur must struggle to stay alive in a society that eats pigs.
  • In Harry Potter, Harry struggles against his anti-magic relatives in the Muggle world.
  • In Star Wars, Luke and the other rebels fight against The Empire.

Character vs Self

Finally we have the most essential conflict in a high-quality story. The character must have some conflict within themselves. They must doubt their abilities, suffer setbacks, and worry about outcomes so that they can rise above it all. All of the characters from all of our previous examples exhibit character vs self. This is a required conflict for narrative writing.

Multiple Conflicts?!

At some point, students will notice that stories can have multiple types of conflict. Since we’re writing short stories rather than novels, I’d limit my students to two types. They must choose character vs self and then may choose one from the other three.

What About…

There are certainly other types of conflict you can introduce to your students. When studying myths, fate is common source of conflict. Characters might have conflict with the supernatural. In a recent workshop, a teacher mentioned time constraints as a common conflict characters must deal with. Feel free to add and remove when you present this idea to your students, but I think a small number of choices is important to help kids get started.



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